tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post2494679034185362708..comments2023-08-28T03:24:28.377-04:00Comments on JP's Poetry: ViableJess PJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-1628870631493280202011-08-20T03:37:13.484-04:002011-08-20T03:37:13.484-04:00Brilliantly written, someone's whole world in ...Brilliantly written, someone's whole world in a few short sentences, so well done.<br /><br />I was sure I'd commented earlier? my computer keeps freezing so I'm glad I came back :o)Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-37111328635366719562011-08-19T16:51:54.260-04:002011-08-19T16:51:54.260-04:00Paige - thank you.
Li - Fewer words sometimes all...Paige - thank you.<br /><br />Li - Fewer words sometimes allows more imagination and personal connection.Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-75439166411570834632011-08-19T16:47:37.772-04:002011-08-19T16:47:37.772-04:00Kim - thank you.
Jenni - Vivid is good for connec...Kim - thank you.<br /><br />Jenni - Vivid is good for connecting with it. I'm glad you enjoyed the writing.<br /><br />Daydreamertoo - thanks.<br /><br />Sheilagh - You're right. It's an event involving both parents.Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-30913120404228461412011-08-19T16:09:21.297-04:002011-08-19T16:09:21.297-04:00sometimes people forget that the father is hurting...sometimes people forget that the father is hurting too, This is a very sad piece.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-39670887320567736312011-08-19T15:55:17.641-04:002011-08-19T15:55:17.641-04:00Awwwww a sad but all too true read.
Great use of ...Awwwww a sad but all too true read. <br />Great use of the prompt words. :)Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-31313999234450003232011-08-19T14:16:33.657-04:002011-08-19T14:16:33.657-04:00the driving home on auto-pilot is very vivid. i li...the driving home on auto-pilot is very vivid. i like how it's written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-62272916167113684412011-08-19T14:12:41.864-04:002011-08-19T14:12:41.864-04:00;( sad.;( sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-15107222145605353752011-08-19T14:04:40.936-04:002011-08-19T14:04:40.936-04:00You captured the angst, sadness, frustration in th...You captured the angst, sadness, frustration in this tight little write. Well done.<br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/19/failed-migration/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-12451706887797518932011-08-19T10:57:03.465-04:002011-08-19T10:57:03.465-04:00Very blunt and hard-hitting! Less is more, as is o...Very blunt and hard-hitting! Less is more, as is often the case.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-9702476875018072692011-08-18T19:24:13.080-04:002011-08-18T19:24:13.080-04:00omg, this poem is captured my heart, so
honestly w...omg, this poem is captured my heart, so<br />honestly written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-24428756331442212992011-08-18T14:46:11.979-04:002011-08-18T14:46:11.979-04:00In fact, the narrator could be male or female. Man...In fact, the narrator could be male or female. Many lesbian couples choose to get a sperm donor instead of adoption.<br />But, the reason I wrote it from that point of view is because that's the way the story formed in my head. I try not to argue with my muse. She's not very helpful when she's angry with me. :)Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-61905360013089327452011-08-18T08:27:59.084-04:002011-08-18T08:27:59.084-04:00Interesting you wrote this from the man's poin...Interesting you wrote this from the man's point of view. I had to double check your profile. How would you have put it the other way round? Emotive piece.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com