tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post9047167658517772771..comments2023-08-28T03:24:28.377-04:00Comments on JP's Poetry: Skid MarksJess PJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-7424540121544432642011-05-23T13:30:55.901-04:002011-05-23T13:30:55.901-04:00Leo - I love when people connect with my poems, th...Leo - I love when people connect with my poems, thanks<br />Matt - well said<br />mind - thanks<br />Madeleine - that was the idea that started the peom, I'm glad you enjoyed it<br />amazing & Eclipse - thanks for appreciating the beauty <br />alive - I always hope people will understand and appreciate the feelings of the poem :-)Jess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-33428348976285821502011-05-23T06:15:19.204-04:002011-05-23T06:15:19.204-04:00Oh! the depiction of sadness is uncanny, loved the...Oh! the depiction of sadness is uncanny, loved the last para, the sadness that has become so usual, that does not let be angry.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-16846391911845104822011-05-23T02:00:44.735-04:002011-05-23T02:00:44.735-04:00Marks across the heart...sad but so beautifully ex...Marks across the heart...sad but so beautifully expressed poem. Thank you for sharing.Eclipsehttp://eclipseofthemoon.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-25560250614301273852011-05-22T19:35:52.388-04:002011-05-22T19:35:52.388-04:00so beautifully sad...so beautifully sad...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-47217731663924021182011-05-22T13:39:53.905-04:002011-05-22T13:39:53.905-04:00Nicely done. I especially like this phrase: "...Nicely done. I especially like this phrase: "She left just as quickly, <br />leaving skid marks <br />across my heart."Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-19807624959780518092011-05-22T10:58:04.538-04:002011-05-22T10:58:04.538-04:00Beautiful portrayal of a broken heart. Wonderful u...Beautiful portrayal of a broken heart. Wonderful use of the words<br /><br />My submissions are Nightmares and JealousyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-91635571377070781572011-05-21T13:27:57.040-04:002011-05-21T13:27:57.040-04:00Well said, especially when you want so badly to be...Well said, especially when you want so badly to be hateful, angry, but all you feel is sadness.Matt Merritthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02731741347561501172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-32134417030980809622011-05-20T11:25:39.456-04:002011-05-20T11:25:39.456-04:00Sad, and poignant. You said it so well! Thanks for...Sad, and poignant. You said it so well! Thanks for sharing, Jessica. It was something I could relate to!Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-10671481422081581602011-05-19T19:42:00.863-04:002011-05-19T19:42:00.863-04:00Laurie - I'm glad it was so vivid for you
JL -...Laurie - I'm glad it was so vivid for you<br />JL - what great advice<br />Nara- I'm glad it brought up the image I was imagining<br />Fear - love sometimes is<br />earlybird - thank you, I really enjoyed your comment. <br />Tarunima - I'm glad you were able to connect<br />Susannah - Thank you<br />Deborah - it's ok to repeat sometimes, thanks<br />jae - what a lovely comment, thank you so muchJess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-50738101600533588232011-05-19T08:02:04.578-04:002011-05-19T08:02:04.578-04:00wonderfully composed piece..in all meanings of the...wonderfully composed piece..in all meanings of the word 'composed'..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-80232452886656314562011-05-19T07:40:56.496-04:002011-05-19T07:40:56.496-04:00Oh my, wonderfully written and just so sad. It'...Oh my, wonderfully written and just so sad. It's been said, but I could feel the loss in those words.Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-40520565255460170562011-05-19T04:52:51.583-04:002011-05-19T04:52:51.583-04:00Beautiful, I love the imagery and can feel the sad...Beautiful, I love the imagery and can feel the sadness. Nice writing!Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-3810911561597044622011-05-19T03:36:17.181-04:002011-05-19T03:36:17.181-04:00beautiful imagery...
i could feel the loss!
thanks...beautiful imagery...<br />i could feel the loss!<br />thanks for sharing..tarunimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00924642457573448209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-23630848313074692452011-05-19T00:57:12.925-04:002011-05-19T00:57:12.925-04:00I liked the image of her leaving 'skid marks a...I liked the image of her leaving 'skid marks across my heart' - it follows on so well from her bursting into the narrator's life. Fully in character, I guess.earlybirdhttp://mangetoutetc.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-88835856448737788462011-05-18T23:53:11.789-04:002011-05-18T23:53:11.789-04:00oh this is so sad.oh this is so sad.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-78866441533098285542011-05-18T20:50:32.003-04:002011-05-18T20:50:32.003-04:00A perfect picture of grief. I could see those skid...A perfect picture of grief. I could see those skid marks across a heart. Great take on the prompt.Nara Malonehttp://naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-87047264967738886592011-05-18T19:27:27.845-04:002011-05-18T19:27:27.845-04:00Love has a way of removig a skid mark that hurt ha...Love has a way of removig a skid mark that hurt has left o our hearts !!<br />Love the poem !<br />JL&BJL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1774560286696096062.post-28414015620921262742011-05-18T19:09:34.071-04:002011-05-18T19:09:34.071-04:00I love the image from the first stanza... sorry ab...I love the image from the first stanza... sorry about your loss.Laurie Kolphttp://www.lkharris-kolp.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com