Neither the beauty of the moon nor a flower in full bloom compare to you, borrower of my heart. Nor could I ever part from my love: you. A hope springs up: you'll see me, lender of heart and love, and want me to be with you.
Carry On Tuesday #114
"Neither a borrow nor a lender be" - Polonius, from Hamlet, by Shakespeare
Included in Jingle Poetry Potluck Week 46
Included in Jingle Poetry Potluck Week 46
You are so talented! (:
ReplyDeletehmmm I enjoy this, it showed someone who is certain of whom she is with and who is her. I have not had that feeling in a bit
ReplyDeleteenjoy the potluck!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/07/29/ever-after/
Very clever spin. Enjoyed much! Thank you...
ReplyDeletea secret love?
ReplyDeleteShakespear would be so jealous! Lovely penning from a fine poet!
ReplyDeleteI ask the same question as lunawitch15.
ReplyDeleteBarley - thank you
ReplyDeletelynn - glad you like it
Jamie - Thanks!
luna - that's the idea :-)
magic - you're too generous
booguloo - yep :-)
Very melodic and a bit sly it seems to me. Waiting in the wings, perhaps?
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it.
very apt and interesting perspective.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Happy Potluck!
Marbles - I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your compliment.
ReplyDeleteJingle - Thank you!
Interesting makes you go hhhmmm
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