Started for National Poetry Writing Month 2011, decided to keep things going. I've always liked writing poetry.
Love the Haiku - I'm searching for inner peace right now.
love this Haiku inner peace is always what you want.
That is really good. I cannot imagine how you ever thought of it, wow.
I love your haiku. It's just perfect for the words chosen.
Andy - it's a noble search, and life longFear - thanks for stopping by! You always have lovely things to sayKwee - Thank you. It just sorta popped up. Sometimes it works like that.bodhi - thanks!
Much Better? I'd say it is downright Perfect. It would be interesting to learn what Ramesh Sood thinks of this.
Ah, inner peace... Ever elusive but still so simple to find if you know where to look. Great piece!
Beautiful its like a recipe for nirvana
There's a lot of truth in this petite piece.
The mind could have it. So much truth in few words :)
There's a search and then an option: tranquility. Nice perspective!
Altonian - that's very kind of youMind - with any luckThomG - thank youbended - sometimes it only takes a few wordsseabell - thanks
A change for better, nice :-)
Simple? Perhaps, but perceptive and true too.
I don't know what you had in mind before but this worked out really well.
No truer words have been spoken.
alive - thanks for stopping byMike - simple is often most effectiveearly - I think so too :)Ren - perhaps, but how does one measure truth?
This haiku is very well done and speaks to a fundamental truth. Happiness is between the ears...and we can control a lot of that with our own perceptions...very good! Vb
This, I needed to hear. Simple words and advice that give such a strong message.
So very true, Jessica! Great haiku.
versebender - a very lovely comment, thank youChristine - glad it was helpful to youMary - thank you!
Nice and inviting to the mind.