Mommy, look at that!
Is that an umbrella?!
Yeah, it is.
Huh.
Flipping, twirling, spinning
in the air.
Held up like a kite,
but wihout a string.
It has a no direction,
flits around
in the air
above the building.
Blue over blue,
handle over canopy,
up on a draft,
down after a tilt.
Twisting, turning, flying
out of sight.
Is that an umbrella?!
Yeah, it is.
Cool.
At a Mustang car show I attended recently with my dad, just as we were starting to leave, a little kid noticed an umbrella up in the air. So, a few of us watched it tumble around for a while until it disappeared behind a building. I wrote the poem for it later that day. It was a magical little moment reminding me of the wonder of childhood and the magic to be found in everyday life.
Submitted to Promising Poets Thursday Poetry Rally 45
*June 6: Thank you to Promising Poets Cafe and the Poetry Rally community for this Perfect Poet Award Week 45.
I am honored.
I would like to nominate MindLoveMisery and C Rose of The World Poetized.
I write to share my
emotions and ponderings.
Glad you liked it. Thanks.
love the flying umbrella imagery,
ReplyDeletewhat a fun piece.
sweet memories, well done.
Soo cute. Fun! fun! fun! :D
ReplyDeleteI really like this, you really captured that moment of wonder. I believe children know a lot more about the true meaning of life than adults
ReplyDeleteI bet that was a sight worth seeing -- great capture of the moment for the child in all of us!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your visit ~~
You're right - nothing is more magical than seeing something through a child's eyes. And it's a rare thing to see an umbrella flying free!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a refreshing poem after reading tons of other depressing ones lamenting about the human spirit today. I like appreciating the little beautiful things much more.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem..refreshing...
ReplyDeleteVery playful-like. :) Enjoyed reading it. :)
ReplyDeleteIt is magic really isn't it that inspires poetry. This was so real Jessica ... it was easy to envision, I especially like that about a poem, this poem.
ReplyDeleteJingle - glad it brought up happy memories
ReplyDeleteJoross - thanks for stopping by and for fllowing :)
mind - I tend to agree with you
becca - it was an interesting thing to see
Li - it was a fun experience, and the kid made it beautiful
Audrey - I'm happy to help lift your spirits :)
Rashmi - thanks
Ravenblack - playful poetry is fun to write
Old Raven - the image and the magic were both the point behind the poem. I'm glad you felt them.
very playful and visually interesting - nice poem
ReplyDeleteIt's so fun to read! cool :)
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