Started for National Poetry Writing Month 2011, decided to keep things going. I've always liked writing poetry.
Someone only at ease in their art... why does the dance ever have to end?
Gorgeous, amazing, I loved it!
Good one- I can see her now...
Peter - I hadn't really thought of it that way. More of a pre-dance nervousness replaced by post-dance accomplishment.thoughts - Thank you!Laurie - I'm glad you got a good picture :)
haha, i like that. i am picturing a first time performer who didn't have a good outing. maybe i am wrong.. :)
I felt i was watching a performance....my mind played out a whole movie in my head through just 9 lines of your writing. Beautiful work
dsnake1 - probably a first timer, I hadn't intended a particular type of performance. myintuitivesoul - I'm glad it was able to paint such a great picture.
Lovely. Nervous, but she did it! Bravo!
Very nice you could picture it all
Kim - Thank you! I'm glad you got a good story out of it. Fear - Thanks so much.
love it.you have amazing writing skills.check out short story slam and make a submission today.