25 May 2011

Naked Tree Haiku

girl shows a small grin
jumble of leaves at its feet
leave the tree naked


Three Word Wednesday CCXLII
grin, jumble, naked
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12 comments:

  1. laurie kolp25 May, 2011 22:19

    That's ironic b/c today I was on a field trip (nature trail) with one of my kids and we saw tall, naked trees. = )

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  2. Mary26 May, 2011 07:49

    You made the most of these three words!

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  3. Sheilagh Lee26 May, 2011 14:11

    A child at play love this.

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  4. Kavita26 May, 2011 17:04

    Aww... the expressions on a kid's face are simply priceless, aren't they?!?!
    A lovely haiku, Jessica!!

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  5. JL Dodge26 May, 2011 23:57

    Very well done !

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  6. Mark27 May, 2011 07:00

    beautiful! I love it! Sometimes we feel so naked when we offer a smile to the world.

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  7. Anonymous27 May, 2011 14:56

    LOL! I can see this so easily. Well done.

    Please come check out my three words if you get the chance.

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  8. Anonymous28 May, 2011 20:07

    This was beautifully done, the imagery stays with me yet, thank you!

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  9. Jess PJ28 May, 2011 21:20

    laurie - How funny!
    Mary - thanks, and thanks for stopping by
    Fear - I'm glad you enjoyed it
    Kavita - Thank you!
    JL - thanks :)
    Mark - what a great thought
    Alice - yay! thanks
    rough - yay for imagery!

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  10. Anonymous29 May, 2011 08:59

    Lovely poem my three year old daughter is completely taken by leaves I can easily visualize this!

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  11. Harshika30 May, 2011 12:12

    nice :)

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  12. Jess PJ01 June, 2011 19:24

    mind - yay personal connections! kids really do have a special way of looking the world
    Harshika - thanks :)

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