Each day I so wanted to hold your little hand in mine and soon get done what you would want of me. So, I came by, and without much hope, to ask (beg) for you to marry me. We said, "I do," soon after.
Carry On Tuesday #107
"So little done, so much to do." - last words of Cecil Rhodes in 1902
I kinda like the 7 lines with 7 syllables.
For some reason, Carry On Tuesday prompts seem to make lovely acrostic type poems.
Cleverly worded!
ReplyDeletenice one!
ReplyDeleteKind of feels like you are stressing on time spent after marriage. You are done with proposals now comes the serious stuff, so much to do. :-)
I enjoy your poetry...it makes me happy.
ReplyDeletevery clever! well done.
ReplyDeleteI love it ! 2 poems within one!!
ReplyDeleteSweet - thanks for stopping by and following
ReplyDeletealive - so much to do indeed! I have a few friends in the wedding planning process right now
AmethJera - thanks for commenting, good to see you
earlybird - thank you!
I am so impressed with the cleverness of this! Bravo
ReplyDeletehow sweet...
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very clever - quite a talent to accomplish with acrostic!!
ReplyDeleteMary - thanks!
ReplyDeleteinnuendo - thank you
becca - i thought it would be a fun arrangement to try and I think it came out well
I love it when people use their noodle!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done