31 May 2011

Each day I so wanted

   Each day I so wanted to 
  hold your little hand in mine
and soon get done what you would
  want of me. So, I came by,
 and without much hope, to ask
(beg) for you to marry me.
  We said, "I do," soon after.

Carry On Tuesday #107
"So little done, so much to do." - last words of Cecil Rhodes in 1902
I kinda like the 7 lines with 7 syllables.
For some reason, Carry On Tuesday prompts seem to make lovely acrostic type poems. 


  1. nice one!
    Kind of feels like you are stressing on time spent after marriage. You are done with proposals now comes the serious stuff, so much to do. :-)

  2. I enjoy your poetry...it makes me happy.

  3. I love it ! 2 poems within one!!

  4. Sweet - thanks for stopping by and following

    alive - so much to do indeed! I have a few friends in the wedding planning process right now

    AmethJera - thanks for commenting, good to see you

    earlybird - thank you!

  5. I am so impressed with the cleverness of this! Bravo

  6. how sweet...
    -robin http://mysecretinnuendo.com

  7. very clever - quite a talent to accomplish with acrostic!!

  8. Mary - thanks!
    innuendo - thank you
    becca - i thought it would be a fun arrangement to try and I think it came out well

  9. I love it when people use their noodle!
    Very nicely done