31 May 2011

Each day I so wanted

   Each day I so wanted to 
  hold your little hand in mine
and soon get done what you would
  want of me. So, I came by,
 and without much hope, to ask
(beg) for you to marry me.
  We said, "I do," soon after.



Carry On Tuesday #107
"So little done, so much to do." - last words of Cecil Rhodes in 1902
I kinda like the 7 lines with 7 syllables.
For some reason, Carry On Tuesday prompts seem to make lovely acrostic type poems. 

11 comments:

  1. nice one!
    Kind of feels like you are stressing on time spent after marriage. You are done with proposals now comes the serious stuff, so much to do. :-)

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  2. I enjoy your poetry...it makes me happy.

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  3. Sweet - thanks for stopping by and following

    alive - so much to do indeed! I have a few friends in the wedding planning process right now

    AmethJera - thanks for commenting, good to see you

    earlybird - thank you!

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  4. I am so impressed with the cleverness of this! Bravo

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  5. how sweet...
    -robin http://mysecretinnuendo.com

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  6. very clever - quite a talent to accomplish with acrostic!!

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  7. Mary - thanks!
    innuendo - thank you
    becca - i thought it would be a fun arrangement to try and I think it came out well

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  8. I love it when people use their noodle!
    Very nicely done

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