25 May 2011

Naked Tree Haiku

girl shows a small grin
jumble of leaves at its feet
leave the tree naked


Three Word Wednesday CCXLII
grin, jumble, naked

12 comments:

  1. That's ironic b/c today I was on a field trip (nature trail) with one of my kids and we saw tall, naked trees. = )

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  2. You made the most of these three words!

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  3. Aww... the expressions on a kid's face are simply priceless, aren't they?!?!
    A lovely haiku, Jessica!!

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  4. beautiful! I love it! Sometimes we feel so naked when we offer a smile to the world.

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  5. LOL! I can see this so easily. Well done.

    Please come check out my three words if you get the chance.

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  6. This was beautifully done, the imagery stays with me yet, thank you!

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  7. laurie - How funny!
    Mary - thanks, and thanks for stopping by
    Fear - I'm glad you enjoyed it
    Kavita - Thank you!
    JL - thanks :)
    Mark - what a great thought
    Alice - yay! thanks
    rough - yay for imagery!

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  8. Lovely poem my three year old daughter is completely taken by leaves I can easily visualize this!

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  9. mind - yay personal connections! kids really do have a special way of looking the world
    Harshika - thanks :)

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