tease me, beckon me forward.
I want to feel your
soft skin pressed against my own.
For now, I will have to wait.
dVerse Poets' Pub: Form for All
Man'yoshu: a widespread form in Japan during the 700s CE
Poems were declarative rather than introspective, imagistic rather than abstract.
1 of 3 topics, Somon: mutual exchanges of love or longing
1 of 2 styles, Tanka: syllable counts of 5-7-5-7-7.
Learn more about the form here.
(Blushing) :)
ReplyDeleteah, well here is to hoping waits come to an end...in their right time...
ReplyDeleteLet's hope the wait isn't too long.
ReplyDeleteBubba - sorry :-)
ReplyDeleteBrian - lovely thoughts
Pat - thanks
this is fun,
ReplyDeleteyou rocked on it.
Cuckooclock - thanks! it was a fun form
ReplyDeletelovely entry.
ReplyDelete:)