Waiting...
Waiting......
Waiting some more...
Waiting Forever...
OMG! I hear the door!
Pleaseletmeout
Pleaseletmeout
Pleaseletmeoutnow!
(whine)
Yaaaaay!
(jump)
I love you!
(jump)
I have a toy!
I love you!
Wanna see my toy?!
I love you!
(wag tail)
Why aren't you petting me?!
Oh yeah. (Sit)
I love you so hard.
Yay for pettings.
(wag tail)
Oh, you're sitting.
Great.
Nap time.
(snore)
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cute for a minute I thought you were talking about me when I have to potty. LOL
ReplyDeleteThis is great , I was fooled for a bit.
ReplyDeleteNot just the words, but the tempo as well, makes you feel you're in a dog's mind.
dog lovers everywhere can relate to this. humorous and heartfelt!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet glimpse into a dog's thoughts. Very nice poem.
ReplyDeletePlus your puppy knows text shorthand! Kewl.
ReplyDeletelol, i love it. :-)
ReplyDeleteCute doggie tale! (I wasn't thinking of dogs in the beginning)
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
Grins - it just felt right to write at the time.
ReplyDeleteJudith - thanks, I like to think I did an ok job with sharing her thoughts :)
booguloo - She's a very smart dog, lol
Susannah - thanks
Andy - It's not obvious it's a dog at the beginning, and I think that adds a bit of fun
playful and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a thrill to land on your amazing poetry land.
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This really made me smile. My dog Timmy is exactly like this, except, when I go out he always thinks he ought to be going with me!
ReplyDeleteA very clever but fun read, thank you :)
Jingle - thanks
ReplyDeleteday dreamer - Jasmine thinks she should go out, too, which is part of why she thinks we'll never be coming back, lol