06 April 2011

Waiting

Waiting...
Waiting......
Waiting some more...
Waiting Forever...

OMG! I hear the door!

Pleaseletmeout
Pleaseletmeout
Pleaseletmeoutnow!
(whine)

Yaaaaay!
(jump)
I love you!
(jump)
I have a toy!
I love you!
Wanna see my toy?!
I love you!
(wag tail)
Why aren't you petting me?!

Oh yeah. (Sit)
I love you so hard.
Yay for pettings.
(wag tail)

Oh, you're sitting.
Great.
Nap time.
(snore)



June 12: Included in The Poetry Pantry 53

11 comments:

  1. cute for a minute I thought you were talking about me when I have to potty. LOL

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  2. This is great , I was fooled for a bit.

    Not just the words, but the tempo as well, makes you feel you're in a dog's mind.

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  3. dog lovers everywhere can relate to this. humorous and heartfelt!

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  4. What a sweet glimpse into a dog's thoughts. Very nice poem.

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  5. Plus your puppy knows text shorthand! Kewl.

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  6. Cute doggie tale! (I wasn't thinking of dogs in the beginning)

    Nicely done!

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  7. Grins - it just felt right to write at the time.

    Judith - thanks, I like to think I did an ok job with sharing her thoughts :)

    booguloo - She's a very smart dog, lol

    Susannah - thanks

    Andy - It's not obvious it's a dog at the beginning, and I think that adds a bit of fun

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  8. playful and beautiful.

    What a thrill to land on your amazing poetry land.
    Cheers.
    Come sharing your poetry with us today,
    First time participants are welcome sharing 1 to 3 random poems or poems unrelated to our theme.

    Blessings.
    Hope to see you linked in.
    Happy Tuesday!
    Hugs.
    xoxox

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  9. This really made me smile. My dog Timmy is exactly like this, except, when I go out he always thinks he ought to be going with me!
    A very clever but fun read, thank you :)

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  10. Jingle - thanks
    day dreamer - Jasmine thinks she should go out, too, which is part of why she thinks we'll never be coming back, lol

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